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Walter Holland's avatar

Nice haiku. Very measured and balanced. The delicate meets the disastrous, as it should be in a good poem.

Trish Is Living La Vida Loca's avatar

Congrats on your excellent haiku. I'm inviting you to submit to my haiku journal at Sense & Sensibility. Please check out the details below.

https://sensesensibilityhaikujournal.wordpress.com/2025/07/29/submissions-open-august-1-for-sense-sensibilitys-september-issue/

Davidson Garrett's avatar

Very moving haiku

Congratulations on your first publication

May you have many more.